by Mystique Woods
I had tears in my eyes when this story finished. Thank you for writing something that was easy to read but that held so much more then just a smut and sex story. Always, E
I cried also when I finished writing this story and kept wanting to read it over and over. Grateful for your comments.
M
what a well written,passionate story of first love.such a sad ending,one that i can only hope has never happened
Absolutely beauitful and so very sad. THe ending made me cry.
~ Sele.
omg i loved this story the ending was so sad i just wish there was a happy ending, it was a great story that wasnt just sex it was love
Loved the descriptions of the sex, but felt like the storyline was rushed, particularly the ending. I didn't feel like I had been able to get to know and relate to the characters enough to be saddened by the death. Also got confused with names - thought the guys name was Duke and then she calls him Sean at the end?
This was actually such a nice and sad love story.. hard to find when erotica is the theme.