All Comments on 'Indiscretion'

No wonder she fell for it: fat girls are so easy.

I suppose that I should be more charitable when it comes to other people’s fantasies; after all, some people might think I’m a bit weird, too. But, for what was intended to be a stroke story, I didn’t find this to be very interesting.

Keep it a secret. Taboo is way more fun.

Really?

Good!

I am a little ambivalent about this story. On the one side, we do have a black wife in the role of the whore. This is so rare that it rates notice. Husband and cheating partner are assumed to be black also. That said, the dialog was awful. He says, "I'm going to give it to you hard and rough!" " Do you like it hard and rough? " She screams, "Yes! Give it to me rough and hard!" Then he gives it to her hard and rough for an hour. An entire freaking hour! They are both super human. Then the LW classic, "Whose pussy is this?" Then the classic answer from the whore, "It's your pussy!"" It's your pussy! " she screams. So he's been fucking himself for an hour? Then , of course, he gets.her ass. We assume it was hers, but can't be sure after the pussy thing. Then after 4.5 hours of constant fucking, assuming of course, that she was getting fucked. Several gallons of cum deposited in someone of course. The nasty bitch then goes home and crawls her nasty unwashed self into bed with the poor black, cuckold hubby. After all that, this was the best story of the night.

Please just stop, no more,

You seem to have enjoyed writing this and good luck to you. For me, two pages of stroke fantasy is about 1.9 pages too much, but then I can skim through it, can't I?

no wonder she was sore. she fucked superman on viagra.

One of those rare stories that doesn't read like it was written by a 13-year-old virgin.

the baboons lol

Very interesting! I'm an aspiring author reading several writings to see what erotica is. My first criteria is to see if I can finish reading it or if I can read through it without stopping. I read it all. I was hooked! But there is a little mistake in the second page that the author should re-read and fix. I love the easy to follow step by step development of the plot. I love the reality of the affair. Thanks for the very nice story.