by MatthewVett
I've been a fan of your works since Our Massage Parlor until today!
It's the good ol' classic MatthewVett's formula of stunning Asian beauty + waters and it always works for me, the length is nice--not too short and not taking time until it gets to the main event. Always keep up the good work, Matt! Will always be looking forward for your other masterpiece!
Well done! I haven't read any of your previous stories but will be soon. I agree with the other comment in that it was a good length but didn't take too long getting to the action. Anticipation is great.
Thanks!
Fantastic story. having had a number of them myself, reminds me of my experience in Galveston. Looking forward to part II.
I'm sorry, but I found the dialogue, particularly in the lifeguard seat, quite unconvincing. In that sort of situation, people don't talk, they do, most communication is non-verbal. I'd find it more realistic if you had the characters expressing those thoughts afterwards, perhaps to third parties
You introduce the woman to a fantasy she always wanted to try, and your character showed the challenge of patience, but once the barrier was crossed, seemed to become a reluctant participant and even fearful. Seems inexplicable and in the future should encourage her fantasies with gusto and the stories will practically write themselves and capture a following. Don't take your character backwards and acting all uncomfortable. It just does not ring true. Good luck.
I agree with the freedom and liberation of skinny dipping. Sex outside is fun too. Your description is excellent.
to a dictionary for a very long time!
Thanks for the great story and the vocabulary expansion.
This is a great story! Fucking awesome is almost good enough to describe it.
This story definitely needs a sequel
Thanks for another great story.
Barks the proverbial Seal of Approval!
Wonderfully lush vocabulary besides.
Thanks.
A nice story that reminded me of my past experiences with a work colleague who never had skinnydipping and eventually went to our local Florida nude beach with me. She wasn't Asian though 🤔
Fantastic! Excellent! Another unique plot/story line. Very enjoyable, my GF will benefit tonight.