All Comments on 'Jenny's Sex Binge Ch. 01'

by mary0256

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great start

Great start, eagerly waiting for further chapters. Hot, Hot, Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Actually 3 pages is enough to have completed the

story--Unfortunately you wasted them on what could have been done is one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
bad

Very poorly written, bad story line, jumpy, reads like an info pamphlet, I just cant make it clear terrible this really is.

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