All Comments on 'Kate Has a New Game To Play'

Nice read good details I hope you add more soon it would be nice if you had the brother and sister and girlfriend move in together and have some kids just a thought great story again I will be joining the site soon so I can leave better feed back

..Refreshing. Wow, a plot and sex scenes, Could there be a second chapter?

Getting better. Characterization and plot are well done. Work on the punctuation, especially for dialog. I am enjoying the story. Keep at it!

Thanks for positive comments so far. In response to anonymous this is actually the fourth in a series about 'Kate', so if you haven't read them please look at them also. I am sure Kate will be back! Thanks!

I am so hooked on this story that I forgot to add comments on the other chapters. More please this great

Am enjoying your stories very much but wish these English teachers would save it for their English class gets tiresome after while with these so called experts giving there puntuationo advice.

it's been quite awhile since your last story with kate,10months.sure hope you will continue the story,it is a very hot story and well writen.iwill keep looking! 561D