All Comments on 'Loose Ends'

by Thefireflies

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Sidney43Sidney43almost 12 years ago

Two idiots who both realize they are being too stubborn, but won't do anything about it and lose a wonderful relationship.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A PARODY ON 1ST DATE SEX

nothing is mention about the last, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
there are times when it is just over

they are said, reconnect one last time and then part. i can see you caught the feelings well.

lawrenclawrencalmost 12 years ago
Reconciliation

I hopetht Iwill have the chance to read about their full fledged reunion.

JusteenKJusteenKover 2 years ago

My goodness, what a desperately sad story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue the 14 page story of Heather and Tim.. I really enjoy your writing style..

Thank you

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy10 months ago

Breaking up is really to do for some couples!

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Ooh man, what a salacious story. I do love the way you express yourself and how vividly you create the scenes. You're a phenomenal writer, thanks for sharing...!

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Thanks for dropping by my story page. I like to write for pleasure, mine and hopefully yours. I still have many story ideas, I'm just excellent at procrastinating, even when I do get time to write. So, my dear readers, please be patient. A quick word about typos: they are prob...