All Comments on 'Manjiri Ch. 01'

Nice work,

Keep it up.

It was very decent of you to have mentioned the person who helped you to edit.

This is a realy piece of work, please continue this story and if could make it a family orgy it will be very nice to read.

Thanks

Being Indian, I like to read Indian background. A slow sexy seduction is the heart of the story. This is very rare in most of the stories. Story comming to direct action without seduction is just a bore.

Good work, now involve hero's wife also. As they are on the verge of being trapped. But mean while they should be (mock)scolled by his wife to their death.

Effective plots can be thought

Pritish

i liked ur story very much and masturbated twice during reading. i m kamran age 24 if any girl boy aunt mom sister brother wana chat about sex they r welcom as i like to chat about sex. my id is:behankayar@yahoo.com

Great job, Ashish. I am eager to read the next chapter of the story.

Gaining access to the forbiden relation without others conciousness n slow seduction is the backdrop of this story. I enjoyed the way story is told n im eager for more...some want it to be a family orgy but i want this secret relation to be continued for the essence n exotism lies in it...its my view./but u hav other readers too...

Just love the way the story moves... Will there be a Ch 02 ?

where is the next part? waiting since long

keep fucking manjari dude she is one hot cunt.tichya pucchhit lund ghalun ghe, tichi pucchhii chatayla visru nako.

awesome!! please carry on, what happened next

The best story so far please continue the story

देशपांडे, मंजिरी नावातच मोह दडलाय. त्यातून मेव्हण्याची बायको हे नातचं मस्त आहे.

माझ्या एका मावसभावाच्या बायकोने बोलता बोलता सांगितले की मी जरा जास्त भरलीय. मी कुठे असे विचारल्यावर तिने तिचे कुल्ले दाखवले. मी हात लावत दाबले तर शहारली व तशीच दाबून घेत उभी राहिली. मला राहवले नाही मी तिला सरळ जवश ओढले व खसखशीत चुंबन घेत योनीवर हात फिरवला. गच्च ओली.

वैशूने नंतर काही दिवसांनी संभोगाचा चान्स दिला. लोण्यासारखे तिच्या कुल्ल्यांवर मी मोहित असल्याने व ते तिला माहित असल्याने वैशूने गुदमैथुन केले.

तिच्या आईला समजल्यावर त्यांनी पण घरी बोलावले व चढवून घेतले