by Dingus Guy
The title alone is great. And my hat off. You took an unusual situation in terms of erotica and pulled it off.
I really enjoyed this, I know you set yourself a challenge with this story so I was looking forward to getting as I worked through the board. Good tale, nicely told with just the right touch of seasonal morality. Thanks.
Will's
When I read the title I was expecting something akin to a cros between "Bridget the Midget does the Dallas Cowboys" and "Ernest's Adventures at the Playboy Masion". In short... I wasn't expecting much from the story. I started to read it for the novelty alone and, boy was I surprised.
The title doesn't do the story justice because this really was a good romance story. Thankfully it wasn't classified under Fetish or something. Sometimes you went alittle overboard with the emotions like the preachy speech to the kids. But I was smiling everytime Marty and Blair were near each other. It seemed like you even did some research and you painted a beautiful picture of the life of a little person. Bravo. My hat is off to you. Still don't like the title.
great story, i really felt for tha guy. nothing wrong with a little morality and erotica rolled into one.
How many authors can pull off a story about a Kosher Midget?? Excellent story telling and creativity!!! A very talented writer.
this is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time you are quite talented and should do this for a living you have quite successfully mixed erotica and a great story together with a lot of class!!! it was a bit long as erotic stories go... butwas very much so worth the time it took to read it if i could rate it a 6 (125) i would
This was such a great one. Well written and very sweet but I felt it ended too shortly (no pun intended) so if you'd like to write a sequel, then please do so..
I've only been on Literotica for about a year. I keep seeing this story pop up on the similar stories list, and I admit, I've been avoiding it. The title made it sound like bad porn. Well, I finally read it, and I really liked it! I am going to look up your stories list, and see if there is a sequel. I want to know what happens to Marty. I gave it 5 *s. I usually only give 4 if I like it. Thanks for the great read! I won't be so judgmental about titles in the future!
I took a chance on this story and was pleasantly surprised. I liked the movement of the story and characters. Thanks for your time and imagination.