All Comments on 'Mate for Life'

Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic!!!!! :)

well written very very enjoyable hopefully you continue to write more like this really made for a great Sunday morning reading it with a cup of coffee thank you much

Been along time sense I read story set is this type of world that good. so well written and great characters and all the little details that make a story a GREAT Story. thank you for sharing Mecmanas

It is very rare that I comment on a story, I usually only vote.

Your story gave me so much pleasure on so many levels, that not to comment seemed to me an insult.

It is so well crafted, rich in description, that despite the "fantasy" of it, one is drawn into the very fabric of your story, a rare talent for an author.

Thank you.

You have raised the bar far above any other story I have read lately. Well done and easily read and understood. My wife is a wolf lover and she also enjoyed it immensely.

Keep it up,

Jerry

This was a really wonderful story. Good plot, action packed and well-written. One of the best ever!

A very enjoyable story. thanks!

That was such an incredibly wonderful, well-written, entertaining story. Thank you!!

Well done. Good cast of characters and an appropriate plot.

Good mcguffin too.

Do tell me what RPG that is. It got my curiosity piqued as I'm a gamer myself. You seem to have a good group going there.

First Great story. Seems to be based off Dungeons and Dragons 3.5, but in a setting without the druids. One comment it seems that the evil cleric associate was just mentioned once and then forgotten.

Turn this into a screenplay and shop it around. Excellent story, excellent characters. Thanks for sharing it!

Good story. Very WoW-y. Written just as Cata came out. Curious :-P

If you're gonna make a sex story 9 pages long tho... you should really really end it with a sex scene. Just somethin to think about for next time. Well written tho. Nice job.

it needs more sex scenes

but over all a good read

That story was GREAT just the way it was written! The sex scenes were juicy enuf for me. Some definitions would have been nice early on, but I figured it out pretty quickly.

Excellent.

This was absolutely brilliant. Loved the characters, the way the story was told, my inner geek loved the d&d setting... And I was blown away by the sex scenes. Even though I would have liked more of them (seriously, seriously hot) it's definitely a quality over quantity thing. I think that the character development and the development of the relationship was a big part of what made the sex scenes as good and believable as they were and I'm glad you didn't scrimp on them.

This was a story that runs true to the fantasy genre. Great characters and you did great with the romance and the erotic scenes as well. Thank you for a wonderul and exciting read

Wow! This story really should be expanded into a full fledged long novel, or even a generational series of novel. I am impressed. This is one of the most well written and developed stories I have read on this site!

If this was a series I would collect them it was like I was reading a book I pay to read

OMG you should write a book!!!

Great story, fast moving, good characters would make a fantastic novelv

I was engaged from the beginning straight to the end! Very few errors and tough spots and it was easy to imagine what the characters looked like and they each had their own unique personalities. Splendid!

I was sad to reach the end.

it has been quite a while since i have read in the sci-fi section and this story is one of the best reasons i can think of to continue. a very well crafted tale, it took me into its grasp, taking me on a journey that my imagination wont soon forget!

lee

Far and away this is the best fantasy story i have read on Lit. Great job, thank you.

Would love to see more from you.

It was a wonderful fantasy story. With all the right tidbits you want in a story - adventure, romance, love, turmoil and of course sex. Would very much love to see more from you.

Oh wow. I love this!! Makes me all warm and fuzzy yet sad that it's over!

Wish I could have given it a 10! =) definitely going on my favorites list.

Ohmygosh... Ifreaken love this story....

Love the story write more you are good and Mendel add more to him.

Obviously Forgotten Realms. Enjoyed the story immensely. Can stand on its own and could stand a follow up. Very nicely done. Thank you.

5 stars going on the favs list.

...this was just wonderful... brilliant story!

Well done and thanks a lot for sharing it!

Well written and engaging, a joy to read. Thank you for posting it!

Of all the romance stories set in the D&D lore, this is by far the best, not only because it is an excellent story - period; but because it translates all the little quirks stemming from the game's rules and builds a believable, consistent universe.

This group of people only lived by shear luck and the authors whim that they would survive. If I had been running this campaign, every single one of the good guys would be rolling a new character right now because they were too stupid to live.