All Comments on 'Maxine's Downfall'

You must write a sequel where he takes her again and again and again.

I've met a few women at work that I would loved to have done the same to. Now I will smile at them & think of the story. Write more please.

This guy would have her again, tell us more

It's possible to put too much detail into a story, and i think you overdid it slightly here. But it's a great story, about taming a bossy woman

Your second story, 'Returning the Favour" is even better. Let's have more from you!

Needs a sequel where you fuck her and knock her up and she knows she is knocked up by you before she heads down the aisle. She don't dare say you are the baby's daddy because of the pics and recording you have of your ass fucking her.

I agree with Don. Write a sequel with her preggie by her rapist. Then write a story of him forcing her to have mind plowing preggie sex.

Wish I'd done that to a few bossy bitches I've known !

No redeeming value in this story of humiliation. Any man who gets a lift out of this should be on a psychiatrist's couch working out his maniacal male ego power fantasies.

By no means would I call this story of rape and humilation of a bossy bitch bad, but I have read better things than this bit of rape. I give this a lukewarm rating at best.

Shame your not still writing, its good stuff