by DDDDave
Great stories, as always.
If I had any criticism, it! would! be! for! fewer! exclamation! marks!, which! break! up! the! flow! of! the! story!!
With out exclamation points how is the reader to know where to put the emphasis?
I use them to help the many readers who need that guidance!
Thanks for the input. I'm afraid it won't effect my future works but I do appreciate that you both read the story and took the time to provide feedback.
DDDDave