by Myhands316
It cut my sleep time by an hour or two, but damn, totally worth it...
While I don't think you will, this deserves a sequel, hook/line/sinker
Now about that sleep time, if i can fall asleep soon, thats almost 5 hours!
I enjoyed the story. I felt that the "angry John" character was out of step with the "loving John" in the bulk of the story but that did not detract from the tale.
I totally got into the story, well told and a very good read. Thank you.
Thanks for the story really enjoyed it.
Now I need to check out some of your older stories.
I really enjoyed your story. It was fun to read. Keep up the good work.
I loved the blending of the cultures. The story telling without preaching. And the immensely entertaining way you pulled us along from one event to another.
suspend your judgments, criticisms, and prejudices, and let yourself slip into the embrace of mother nature at her finest.
if only . . . .
and am so glad I did.
Susan and Tallbear deserve their own story.
I always enjoy a story with a different view on legends/tales/etc, and to see the female lead doesn't have to be of Hollywood proportions.
2nd time reading this story and I feel as good....if not better than I felt after my 1st reading. WONDERFUL STORY. You great authors are gonna inspire me to start (or at least attempt) to start writing for this site. Thank you once again for this inspirational story.
I stumbled accross this story by mere accident and was gripped from the word go.
This is not my usual reading but really enjoyed it and hope to hear how Tallbear gets on.Thanks for a wonderful story.
Not the usual story I read, but lately I've been reading some werewolf and cat stories,
and found you as a reference. The story was excellent, imaginative, and yet somehow satisfying. Thank you, Mike!
But perfect.
I abandoned some of your other stories mid page 1, this was good,
Now every time I look up at the night sky, and see Ursa Major I'll think of this story!
Five Stars for an excellent read!
... yeah, that!
An interesting story, and that's putting it mildly.
And one that I enjoyed a lot.
Thank you, and 5 Stars.
ps, it said "The Beginning", and I sincerely hope so.
Your take on American Indian lore of the animal spirits is absolutely mind boggling. I love this story, and I will remember it for a long time.
as that last commenter offered.
Disney was a right wing criminal that lead myriad youngsters to have lifelong false expectations....Just to make fat profits.
And fuck the grammatically obsessive prigs besides..
Writing original stories is hard enough, and editing is painfully , painstakingly boring.
We readers pay nothing for the work we are consuming and have no grounds to grouse.
That was a fine, warm story, vivid and satisfying...Though the removable fur coat was a bit much. (wry grin) Thank you
A very unique and thought provoking story, I greatly enjoyed it! It was one of those kind of stories that made you wish there alot more chapters to it, But you left it, in such manner, that the story line could be picked up and continued rather seamlessly. Many thanks, for a great little read!