All Comments on 'Midwinter's Eve'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
well then...

It cut my sleep time by an hour or two, but damn, totally worth it...

While I don't think you will, this deserves a sequel, hook/line/sinker

Now about that sleep time, if i can fall asleep soon, thats almost 5 hours!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very good

I enjoyed the story. I felt that the "angry John" character was out of step with the "loving John" in the bulk of the story but that did not detract from the tale.

sober71sober71over 9 years ago
Very good

I totally got into the story, well told and a very good read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Couldn't put it down…

and my muse, who is a proofreader, stayed quiet!

;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it!

A good tale indeed.

Roger

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
really fun story

now that's getting back to nature

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wonderful

Absolutely loved it! Please write more :)

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 9 years ago
Fun tale

Missed a tag though. Furries!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

keep up the great work thanx truely a great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good read

Thanks for the story really enjoyed it.

Now I need to check out some of your older stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good read

I really enjoyed your story. It was fun to read. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
awesome tale

Had me reading from start to finish good job

JohnSpiritWolfJohnSpiritWolfabout 9 years ago
Osiyo

Interesting take of the story of the 7 Sisters.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
thank you for a wonderful story

I loved the blending of the cultures. The story telling without preaching. And the immensely entertaining way you pulled us along from one event to another.

suspend your judgments, criticisms, and prejudices, and let yourself slip into the embrace of mother nature at her finest.

if only . . . .

rightbankrightbankabout 8 years ago
I had to come back for a visit

and am so glad I did.

Susan and Tallbear deserve their own story.

SciFurzSciFurzabout 8 years ago
Very original

I always enjoy a story with a different view on legends/tales/etc, and to see the female lead doesn't have to be of Hollywood proportions.

heydog52heydog52about 8 years ago
A GREAT REFRESHING FEEL GOOD STORY

2nd time reading this story and I feel as good....if not better than I felt after my 1st reading. WONDERFUL STORY. You great authors are gonna inspire me to start (or at least attempt) to start writing for this site. Thank you once again for this inspirational story.

ukguy55ukguy55about 8 years ago
Excellent imagination.

I stumbled accross this story by mere accident and was gripped from the word go.

This is not my usual reading but really enjoyed it and hope to hear how Tallbear gets on.Thanks for a wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I agree!

Not the usual story I read, but lately I've been reading some werewolf and cat stories,

and found you as a reference. The story was excellent, imaginative, and yet somehow satisfying. Thank you, Mike!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Unusual

But perfect.

I abandoned some of your other stories mid page 1, this was good,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ursa

Now every time I look up at the night sky, and see Ursa Major I'll think of this story!

Five Stars for an excellent read!

MarshallaMarshallaover 5 years ago
Anon 3/18 "Ursa" ...

... yeah, that!

An interesting story, and that's putting it mildly.

And one that I enjoyed a lot.

Thank you, and 5 Stars.

ps, it said "The Beginning", and I sincerely hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it!

Your take on American Indian lore of the animal spirits is absolutely mind boggling. I love this story, and I will remember it for a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wishes

This would make a very good (adult) Disneyesque movie.

rayironyrayironyabout 4 years ago
Oh Gawd,,,Please don't dare go all Disney on us

as that last commenter offered.

Disney was a right wing criminal that lead myriad youngsters to have lifelong false expectations....Just to make fat profits.

And fuck the grammatically obsessive prigs besides..

Writing original stories is hard enough, and editing is painfully , painstakingly boring.

We readers pay nothing for the work we are consuming and have no grounds to grouse.

That was a fine, warm story, vivid and satisfying...Though the removable fur coat was a bit much. (wry grin) Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A very unique and thought provoking story, I greatly enjoyed it! It was one of those kind of stories that made you wish there alot more chapters to it, But you left it, in such manner, that the story line could be picked up and continued rather seamlessly. Many thanks, for a great little read!

stewartbstewartbabout 2 years ago

Well worth the read ... you just have to bear with it until the end.

UncertainTUncertainTover 1 year ago

Great storytelling.

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