All Comments on 'Mili's Amateur Modeling Takes Off Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
really good

continuation of the story, keep going. just dont let us wait so long :-)

OnethirdOnethirdover 7 years ago
Angles

Very nice job for all these chapters. The description of implied shots is quite detailed and intriguing. Mili seems uncomfortable about being known as a porn star, but she's clearly all that. And her husband doesn't seem to mind much, though he's been left in the dark.

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