All Comments on 'Miracle on Slutty 4th Street Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

This was so hot! I can't wait for the next one

ranfallboyranfallboyabout 5 years ago
One of your most hardcore endings yet

Never seen you dissect an marriage to pieces to this level in a while, loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Love it!

God I love it. I love the chapters but this epilogues are the culmination of all things I wanted those stories to end. I especially loved Sylvia and Jon's. She got pregnant and he bought her a bigger ring. And preceded to have lots of babies together. It got me off! I wish Jamie and Kevin did more than updating relationship status online. But I loved it too. Can't wait for Colin and Rachel's epilogue. Hope she gets pregnant and he has to buy her a house and spoils her. Give her the things he didn't give to his wife

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I liked some of the endings

I don't understand why Liam is still with his girlfriend if he's getting all the benefits of a team player? I get that him and Hannah aren't a thing, they just have nasty sex. But he doesn't really love Jess anymore.

disturbedhrtdisturbedhrtabout 5 years ago
Great but

I think you cut Kevin’s story off to quick both times it would of been interesting to see other young female interns get involved with him

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I assume that all the families will get their epilogue and maybe a bonus.

I am curious. Will Liam spend next Christmas with Jessa, his father Roger, and sister Deb? Or with his Mother, her husband Jon, as well as his 'friend' Hannah and/or Courtney? I am sure Sylvia and the rest would understand.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Your epilogues are always some of the best parts of your stories and this is no exception. Great work!

airejoredinzairejoredinzabout 5 years ago
Excited to read the next epilogue

Especially interested to see what happens with the characters from chapters 4 and 9.

Blueorange2Blueorange2about 5 years ago

This was so hot! I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Awesome

Your shit fuckin’ rocks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Liam need to corrupt another couple of girls!

suze_teachersuze_teacheralmost 4 years ago
Lacey and Devin finally had sex

Lacey and Devin finally had sex - That should be a story in itself. I would love to read about how he managed to seduce her in much more detail.

Whether Devin bragging to his buddies got back to Lacey's husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Agree with suze_teacher's suggestion. Would love to see that part in more detail.

mastadonikamastadonikaalmost 2 years ago

Kindly requesting more Kevin Burkhouse stories please.

Either expanding on the sex between him & Jamie that has already taken place or more that continues.

Or,

More Kevin Burkhouse type stories, if possible.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I want more stories with Sylvia and Jon. Maybe a spinoff series that goes more in depth about their escapades

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2/28/24 It’s reached the point where I’m being regularly asked for an update, so I suppose I should oblige. The good news is that I have been making good, steady progress, and I am currently working on the sex scene as we speak. That being said, it’s another long one, and eve...