All Comments on 'Monica the MILF'

Well written and a real turn on but didn't like the nothing ending.

To the previous commentator:- There has to be a little ambiguity/uncertainty in life or else all would become predictable and boring. Perhaps that is how you would like it - sad. Great story and very plausible.

Nicely told in excellent prose that captures the unutterably dull ennui that married life can fall into. Thank you.

Thoughtful, Considerate, Delicate, and best of all -

Very nicely Romantic! Sure beats the Wham Bam of most the

stuff here.

Jeeze man, you keep me off balance with the range and the depth of your stories. I read one that was very good, then the follow up that is didn't even bother to vote on, then this one. This one is one of the better written stories I have ever read on this site. The thing that surprises me the most is it is not even close to the kind of stories I usually like. This one however, really captured and kept my attention. Great work. Please keep writing.

Mike S.

There should be at least a 2nd chapter to this if not more!!!

Really captured the feelings we have in that situation.

ALS, I never seem to get anywhere at the grocery, though!

I'm going to read some of your other work, because I liked this one worth 5*.

This was written really well. I am going to watch out for your work. Thanks for this submission.

Well crafted and so very much like real life, keep writing...

I know it was short on purpose, like their tryst. But I was betting the wife was going to come home and find him in the shower for a change.