All Comments on 'Mr. Bra Fitter'

Light and fun. Cute and just right for the upcoming holiday. Nicely done. Thanks for the effort.

That was fun !! Thanks very much.

I liked it! Very nicely done - a good story and an education on bras - what could be better? Well, a sequel would be nice. )hint, hint) ;)

I loved this story. A definite 5

Clever premise.

Great back story.

But when it fot to the sex it merely 'mentioned' what was happening. Needed lots more foreplay/preliminaries. With dialog about what was happening, and what was wanted next.

Certainly needed lots of boob action. Handling. Kissing. Sucking. Titty-fucking.

An editor/proofreader would help. You wrote, for example: "...She pulled her shirt taunt..." You meant TAUT.

Four stars.

Original and fun! 5 stars.

Fun, original story. Also a good historical research effort. Well done.

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Sweet und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Interesting. I learned things. I always thought it strange that females, particularly American ones, wore underwear with nightclothes. Not so much elsewhere. Must be the prudish aspect.

That was entertaining.

Very original and informative. Definitely romantic. Well done.

A good story filled with interesting information. It's too bad that only a few stores, usually major department stores, have professional fitters. I have seen and felt some really uncomfortable bras. Usually unattractive ones as well. All of the women I've been fortunate to sleep with, didn't wear panties to bed. I know my mother did. I wonder if it was just generational or has the "fresh" knowledge penetrated more modern women?

Fun, entertaining read! Loved the family feel of the storyline and how the teenage daughter actively tried to enhance her parents marriage. 4.4*

Very entertaining story!

5

I believe this is probably one of the most informative yet distinctly entertaining pieces I've read in a contest like this. Many times providing a lot of historical context would be boring, but you manage to fit it in such a way that it seems natural and oddly enough, you provide a lot of believable transition to where the historical information doesn't tend to bog story down. So yes.. this is quite unique in those two ways I can think of.

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Part of your premise is using Eros to reignite Tanya's parents' romance. You actually do it in a fairly consistent way with what I've seen some modern media or things dealing with the so-called old gods: the universal idea is that they were either asleep or moved on to a different plane of existence. You address this--and somehow manage to connect with that--which surprised me. Another thing is you uniquely craft Cupid into a quick study, adapting him to modern day life without it seeming too convenient. The fact that you preface all this with gods being highly intelligent and perceptive is really what sells that. Additionally, you make him very practically- minded, which varies greatly from the classical perception of gods as being blind to most humans' affairs.. and seemingly randomly blessing them or cursing them strictly for their own entertainment. That wasn't the case in the story at all; in fact, you turned the historical criticism I just named completely on its head! That is an interesting way to deal with what was always considered as a major misunderstanding, and you convert it to a strength for your story. Additionally, you make the idea of Ross being a professional fitter to be extremely approachable, non-invasive, and even quite natural. I'm sure this is surprised many readers, because the thing is a man having his hands on a woman even in that situation would seem quite creepy probably to the average female.. and I couldn't disagree, as it would seem to generate a lot of cringe factor. However you make it seem just all in the day's work, and while this may seem excessively convenient for the story, I'm willing to suspend enough disbelief to say that this could have been pulled off well or well enough.

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While you ease the idea of Ross into the picture, by both having him help Tanya's mom and then appear at the saloon to help Tanya's dad.. the one thing that happened or that doesn't go as smoothly is that their sex is not that well detailed; in fact, it seems very mechanical and quite lacking in transition between different things they offer each other. Furthermore, the idea that the story posits is for Tanya to convince her mother to employ sleepwear without undergarments, and this seemed very plausible to help ignite passion with her husband. The problem became you used both Tanya and her mother together, where both were wearing sleepwear without undergarments. This was a miscalculation, as it just didn't need to happen- - as you posited only for Tanya to convince the mother- and the rest should have been left out; in other words, for the father to catch glimpses of intimate parts of his daughter when this is supposed to be only a romance rekindling cheapens the story in that part and diminishes its impact. In fact, that seemed to introduce the very cringe you were hoping to avoid with the very idea of the professional fitting. Otherwise had you kept it with the very deliberate explanations and actions that Ross displayed toward the female clientele while fitting them, that part could have come off far more easily.

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This is most definitely one of the more original tales that I've read, and it had me giggling in several spots too. You take something with the history and introduce it without boring us to death; in fact you integrate it into the story well, effectively building up the street cred for Ross and his fitting service--along with increasing patronage for Tanya's mother shop. It would have been wonderful had the same detail been applied to the sexual interactions with Tanya's parents, as it was lacking; also, we could have done without getting gratuitous glances underneath Tanya's garments by the dad. However, I thank you for largely pulling off a story that I frankly... only looking at the title.. thought had little chance of succeeding. So pretty well done overall, but the highest I can rate this with these factors that didn't quite possess the same polish as the rest... a 4.

I really tried to like this story and it was a great idea.... but the fact that **SHE THREW A FRYING PAN at her husband** kind of ruined it for me from the beginning. No amount of lingerie or sex can compensate for abuse. He doesn't need to rekindle sex with her, he needs to run to safety.

what a great original story, I really enjoyed reading it.

An intriguing premise, followed by nice plot exposition. I’d love to read further adventures of Tanya, with Eros himself as her wingman. :)

Rg:

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I thought I'd go back through and revisit a story here and there that I know I voted on and especially commented on, and I wanted to tell you and reinforce how unique of an idea your story posited, especially because of the fact that Cupid is historically known as being incredibly self-centered and selfish. Your story really turned that historical idea completely on its head! I know I was hoping that your story would have a legitimate shot at placing but I noticed early on that the way the scoring for your story was going, that it was probably going to take at least a 4.85 or better to actually place. Regardless, I'm also disappointed that with such a unique creation, that it only garnered three more comments after I made my comment- - and that was a huge difference in time --which really befuddles me. I always wonder what content consumers are thinking- - if they're thinking at all of course - - when such a catchy title, and definitely one of the more unusual ones I've ever read, doesn't earn the traffic it should. I want to compliment you once again on such a different idea that should have scored far better, and definitely should have garnered more votes and comments.

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I've been around here for quite some time... basically since about 2014.. and I voted in every contest that I knew of that is taking place since that time. However in 10 years of voting in these contests, I have never seen my legitimate votes obviously removed- - and I know no author has that power-- and while my four would not have helped you nor hurt you.. I hope that there wasn't some type of system malfunction that happened, because I can't help but wonder if there were at least a few voters that got disenfranchised that could have helped you, because your content alone on the idea of it would certainly have made at least a few more voters want to vote a five. So that miffs me, and it really bothers me, because now I know why one author that used to write exclusively on this site left, and four others that I correspond with regularly outside of here also rarely compete in these competitions because they made comments to the same effect.

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I want to encourage you to keep trying, and certainly continue drawing on your uniquely creative muse, or whatever source you drew upon to craft such an unexpected gem for a story. I'll even tell you a really personal story that hopefully will make you laugh: there were two different times where my mother sent me into a JCPenney's and the different time, a Dillard's- - specifically to buy her a bra! Can you believe it?? She actually sent me with a slip of paper and asked me to buy her a certain brand- - and even gave me her cup size - - and specifically told me before I left the house because she was sick, that she wanted one of these two different brands because they actually were one of the few that consistently fit. Can you imagine my embarrassment... especially that of a 16-year-old teenager to walk into a place and desperately praying that you found a female salesperson? This might be funny to you, and it should be, because now I can at least laugh at it: the poor female sales clerk said oh honey what's wrong?! I handed her the slip of paper and she said, oh sweetie I understand...don't worry! We have those in stock and I'll go over and pick those up for you and ring you up and get you out of here as soon as I can! I know I griped at my mother about that for the longest time afterwards, but at least I can share a humorous story that truly happened, because I don't want you to be discouraged by these results at all: in fact, my favorited your story and I will start following you, because somehow I missed that you actually had this happening in a small Texas town? I'm sorry I missed it the first time. However, I will be reading your stories going forward, and I strongly encourage you to continue providing your best efforts to supply this site with good and original content like you have with a story. Chin up buddy!