All Comments on 'My Angel Ch. 02'

Cat wait for chapter 3 hopefully they get some alone time. He should give her her own special ring too

The story needs the help of an editor. The far, frequent, and over use of "word -- word" harms and isn't good writing which even grade school kids wouldn't use.

I agree that the device in question is slightly overused, but honestly, Griff's work is pretty good from a technical point of view. Just this editor's opinion. :)

YOU cannot let this end, more please

Give us more. I was so wet reading this. I want to read more. Maybe we'll see the little slut friend of Angel's that he fucked before.