All Comments on 'My BFF is a Lesbian Ep. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

Can’t wait to see where this will go! Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful

I generally enjoy this type of story more than most; schoolgirl bff's becoming more.

This one is top of the league table.

Wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic

The reactions between each character were so unexpected and nuanced that i wonder if this story is based on a true relationship. Fantastic. And so so hot

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 5 years ago
Beautiful

Loved the time you took to introduce Gabby and Mary. Please continue

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 5 years ago

Loved it. Glad there's a part two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

Its so amazing, the word choices, the coyfull play, the fluidness of the story. I love it, its amazing and i wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

As a woman who has been here with “straight” friends before, there is something in your writing that is so heartbreaking and sad for Gabby. It’s a very honest portrayal of sexual exploration, while still being completely and totally hot. Well done.

BrokenQuillBrokenQuillover 4 years ago

Lovely tale, well written with great descriptives. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wow

nice work! glad you commented on my story, so i found yours. looking forward to reading more!

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 3 years ago

very exciting and erotc writing, you did very well. solid four stars

Nicole2023Nicole20239 months ago

I’m enjoying the exploration..hope gabby isn’t hurt

AmberSolisAmberSolis5 months ago

Awesome story. Your description of that first kiss was brilliant. five stars and favorited.

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