All Comments on 'My Masked Masseuse'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cute ending

I love how it was his wife!

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Flowing

Nicely paced, ebbing and flowing through its various stages of anticipation (undressing, showering, massaging) to realisation (loving). The twist at the end raised a grin of appreciation.

Quibble: She removed his jacket and a few lines later was undoing each button on his jacket. Guess that should be shirt.

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 8 years ago
Short and sweet

Another good story. So imaginable, so real.

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