All Comments on 'Pay Your Way'

I enjoyed the forcefulness, and the sexual descriptions. It was good. More to come?

Enjoyed the story - I hope you follow it up with what happens next.

enjoyed the story and waite to hear more of what he has planned for her.

I liked the way it built from a chance encounter to a wild scene. I might have given more words to the sensuality of removing her clothes slowly instead of ripping them off.

But then,this is Non-Concent after all, and not First Time or Loving Wife. My idea would be to have her remove her clothes and tie her up with knitting yarn. Of course, she could break them in a second, but the idea is mental control. Her mind knows she could....but doesn't dare. Just a thought for you next episode.

Very impressive, just what a non-consent should be: rough but sexy.

That was one if the best non-consent stories I've read in a long time. You should work on your wording a little but everything else was great!

wow great story please continue make her become his whore servicing mugs while he robs them

wow great story please continue make her become his whore servicing mugs while he robs them

Hot story, I loved it.

I hope she gets back at her husband though...What kind of guy is he to say "keep her"

Oh well, sounds like she had a better time with Dan.

Well done

The title says it all.

love this story, still makes me hard!!! would love to watch a porno like this

Loved it!