All Comments on 'Payal ki Jhankar Ch. 12'

Something is missing...Where was "Bin Laden?

You ended the historic saga with a spectacular finale. Well done! We will miss Payal's exploits but hope to see more on Nida's activity or your other equally awesome stories. Keep writing.

Superb ending to a superb story! Payal has new vistas to explore as she ages, this chapter of her life is over. Thank you for writing this fabulous story!

Sir your stories are amazing. Are you on twitter as @mughalba

On my younger sister's regular insistence I read your story.... it was so engrossing that whenever I got time from my household chores, I would read its next chapter. Thanks for the story.

What a lovely way to end this story.

You’ve disappeared Mughal. Pity you haven’t written more.

It’s been a long time to this finale of a superb series. As a fan of both your writing and characters, one feels it’s about time you started with a series on Nida. You’ve already teased her appearance. What better way to write a compelling globe trotting series with Nida along with Payal making some sexy appearances.

I love it ... I just love it Mughal punajbi ... Ur narration ... 1982-2002 cover all political scenario of Pakistan... Liberals pakistan I love it ... Did I miss pajjao died...or he will be nida -pajjao rivalry with

Quite possibly the best story on literotica. I think it’s best you ended it here and haven’t continued Payals or Nidas stories. It’ll be difficult to top this story.