All Comments on 'Payback! Bad Sister Punished'

A great 'tease' ! ... Look forward to ' .. another story." !!

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Take Care, Stay Safe Levi

That's it, that's all of it? That wasn't worth the time spent reading it, and it barely made one page.

Good story. Hoping for some further action between them.

That could be one of the most realistic stories I've read. Not every sibling gets to jump on the other. However, a follow up chapter could change this dynamic. Be interesting to see this brother/sister act become more erotic.

It's a good story, but it's no where close to being finished. It needs a couple more chapters, maybe 4 or 5 more.

A better story summary. I honestly expected more than that.

Very good simply erotic story no sex just fun between adult sister and brother. Chapter 2 could bring back the April fool jokes started by either one. The other one gets just as good of a revenge joke. Maybe some sex between the two in the last chapter as the joking builds up.

How bout some fucking?!?!

Well that was a waste of time.

Great build up, now write the rest of the fucking story...

That was sweet, but you know what? I'm not here for sweet. I'll remember this story when I'm scrolling...and I'll keep scrolling.

This was pleasant. Sexy, fun, character driven- really an excellent piece