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All Comments on 'Playing With My Sister Ch. 13'

by KenJames

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hey man

This is a very good story, my only unfavourable criticism being that it took a long while to get to the two fathers and their two sons incest action. If you write another with the same characters, or even new ones, may I respectfully suggest that you cut down on the preliminary verbage. I know story construction takes time but this isn't Dickens, its sex hard and raw and readers want to get straight in with it. OK, so the first section is very sexual but this is basically a male-on-male incest story and we need to get to the action quickly. But when you did finally get there, the action was great so do keep on writing, there is a lot of talent there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
next submission

i liked the series is it over now

Marvin49Marvin49over 10 years ago
Good job

Very nice love it

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I was born in Denver and raised in Cheyenne, Wyoming. My first time with another boy was in my early teens. Girls came a few years later. After I graduated from the University of Wyoming, I spent a year as a roadie for a series of rock and roll bands, then moved to Austin to ...