All Comments on 'Power Plays Ch. 02'

I like the internal struggles of Claire. It keeps things very interesting. And, of course, the sex is super hot. I also love that you ended with the same line as the first chapter. Interested to see how this plays out, can't wait for the last chapter. :)

This story gets a "5" from me because I find myself as hooked on it as Claire is on Madison. As with nearly all the stories I really like, it is the capacity of the characters to surprise--themselves as well as me the reader--that makes Power Plays irresistable.

you're killing me smalls! i just want to keep reading and reading. i have to say i'm enjoying this far more than i should.

THE FUCKIN BEST!!!!! but omg when is the rest comming??????? i havent read anything better!!! I rated it 5,i wish i coul've rated it higher tho

may we please have chapter 3...im dying here and im sure im not the only one

- Amanda

I squealed when i saw your update. You have a voice in your work like none i've ever seen and madison is such a unique character.

omg i am with the other readers! you are definitely a talented writer. this is one of the best stories i've read on this site! and there absolutely has to be a chapter 3!!! and 4...and 5...and 6...there just has to be more! lol

No drop in quality of writing, no decrease in intensity, none of the disappointment that often comes in later chapters of Lit stories. The first person narrative of Claire's thoughts, emotions, experiences, conflicts, etc. is so realistic and so detailed. I, of course, look forward to reading Chapter 3. But an idea just struck me. How about a follow-up story based on Madison's internal thoughts and experiences?

This is just fucking amazing! I especially like that the last sentence sounds so familiar. On to chapter 3!

This is a hot read. Great story. I think you are underrated 5+ from me. Looking forward to the next chapters!

This is insane, how hot this story is