All Comments on 'Prince Bonir Vol. 05'

I have perused a fair number of stories here and this is my first comment ever.

I would have never guessed that I could have been drawn into a story from several centuries ago. But because of your characters - the benevolent Duke, the concubines and Sigrid and Petra, your story came to life.

And the descriptions of sex acts occurring in medieval times was hilarious. Add to that a storyline that seemed real for those times.

Thanks for sharing your talent and imagination.

This is a nice little story. I'm sorry that you abandoned it, as there seemed to be some obvious plot elements that could have been expanded on, ie. the unwed king Eddy, Sigrid's return, mother, sister (not a fan of incest, but perhaps some other angle), more doings at the Wytch's Hotel, Norwegians, Danes, the rest of Europe, ...

That was quite a good story.

It's unfortunate that you didn't expand it further. I would have loved to see poor Sigrid's future. Perhaps even his Mother's and Sister's.