All Comments on 'Realization Ch. 02'

Have Joan discover phillip fucking his sister and then getting her pregnant.

what the fuck he really doesn't act like he loves her it seems he is just using her to get off and doesn't care about her feelings at all also there was no explaination as to why she was crying is she regreting getting involved with him or just upset that he doesn't care about getting caught or about her feelings a little explanation would have been nice

Even in the first installment of this story there was evidence that Philip was becoming a user.

This continuation confirms it.

The story had enough going that it could have had another part.

I see that it is a very old writing.

Looks like the author gave up.