All Comments on 'Riding the Storm Ch. 01'

Very nice and well done. Would be interested to see if you continue with this story line.

What a wonderful story - so seductive!

Please continue

M

Thank you for answering Voyage of Discovery with Riding the Storm. WOW, smoldering. After every other paragraph, I had to stop reading for a moment and cool off lol. The classy yet unrestricted inhibition between Charlie and her dad is exotic. This was again masterfully narrated and the reader feels as though the storyline is actually happening to him. Very vivid and intelligently layed out. Charli is most lovable. Applause and appreciation. Please enduldge us with more...

A very good start (slow but good).

I hope to see much more!