All Comments on 'Rob's New Life'

To long.

What I read was a mix of Loving Wives, Lesbian Sex, and probably some other stuff, but I just gave up.

Next time consider releasing it in chapters. This was just painful.

I loved the story and if it had been released a series of chapters I don't think I would have contiued to read them,Because as what happens with a good book some passages are to good to put down when reading, You don't want to spoil the mood of the story when you try and start re-reading it again

I think it was perfect had it all and for me kept my attention all they way through. good job love the longer stories like that. That has possible life like events. hope you have lot more like it.

I enjoyed this story. It was long but held my attention all the way through, which is exactly what I like. The plot was fun, with enough elements in it to keep up the interest. My only complaint is that the dialog sounds stilted. You need to use contractions. People talk with contractions, they are not bad grammar. Please keep up the writing.

Has a little bit of everything, and you put it together very well. Please write more and often.

Lots of good stuff in this buffet to pick and choose from to savour... thanks for sharing!

Now are we going to get a Follow-up to tell us how everyones Lives went afterwards. Any Marriages Like Brandy & Rob or Connie & Jerry?

For such a long story, it has a very abrupt ending. Almost as if you ran out of ideas. I hope you revisit the characters and give us an update.

One of the difficulties in writing such long stories with so much sex is that the sex begins to sound mundane and the characters become one-dimensional.

Why do writers use stuff like  that even Google can't find?

Two different browsers, two different fonts and it's still tofu (a blank white block).

and one where it hurts if you weaken. TK U MLJ LV NV

There is no ending.

Who doesn't even blink when finding out that someone has sex with her mother and with her father? Who takes in stride that someone in she's interested has sex with his sister? Likely, my expression resembled that on the meme showing a young man reading "50 Shades...": no juices flowing when the stomach is churning.

Jerry is serious about Connie and doesn't want Rob having sex with her, but, oh, all of these people having sex with each other and within their own families -- that's nothing! Rob's new life is as sad as the company he keeps.

It could have been broken into a couple of chapters, but I do not mind reading a good long story if it is good. Yours is good, please continue writing. A follow up on this story would be appreciated.

Amazing story love description and story line live the long stories

...and farfetched.

Part of why it is so good.

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Paul in Oklahoma

Great story but maybe should have been under the incest description. Also would have liked to hear a bit more of Betty’s downfall.