All Comments on 'Sabine'

This is so far above the level of almost everything on literotica that I am at a loss for words. There was not a false note.

A beautiful, beautiful story. Wonderful gradual, romance followed by earth-shattering sex. Well done.

This is an absolutely superb story. The timing and vocabulary are expertly judged. I especially like the way you involve religious faith in the story - so natural and convincing (uniquely so in my experience). Outstanding in every way.

A truly excellent story that brought tears to my eyes.

Everything about this story was lovely. The setting, the buildup, the religious angle, the emotions, the sex.

Vor allem die spritzende Orgasmen.

Great!

I have never read or imagined such an erotic coupling, plus a love story, plus a journey to self discovery. Thank you.

KatieAnn, that was absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Well written, and very convincing.

Thanks for the huge effort. You did extremely well.

Thank you.

Brilliantly written!

Wonderful and beautiful. What a great romantic story.

I just wished the german had the English with it, I felt like I was missing the real emotions. the worst though was the hairy woman and the break up.

I wonderful story of searching and then finding ones true love!

My only other comment is that you woke me from my dream with the ending... Too short, too nondescript, and the wrong timing of it.... The immense build up followed by a short ending...

Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story!

L

I was especially drawn to the tentativeness early on. Too many stories go from nervous glances to full blown hardcore pro style stunt fucking, but this one took the relationship step by step and did it very well. Both the romance and the erotic bits seemed to have a natural feeling growth.

I also liked the ending where distance, direction and age ensured that it could not last, but the relationship was at least mature enough to be looked back at with fondness and some joy.

THat felt... real. Real and universal.

Astounding story - fantastic romance, beautiful emotions and scorching hot sex. Quite possibly the best story on the site!

Thank you for this. It's one of the best writing I've read in a long time!

This should have been a book, and damn the ending... #SAD

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel or an alternate ending. I love the development and I am too attached to the characters to call it quits. This is the best story I've read so far l, and it is so relatable. If you write books, let me know because I will buy ALL of them

Thanks so much for sharing!!

I can't even explain my emotions right now. And I don't even know what else to say ...except EVERYTHING about it was beautiful!

loved this story . everything about it.. you are an amazing writing. Wish there was more but im happy, thanks for this it opened my eyes. keep writing your amazing

you are a very good writer, I love this story it is truly a great piece of work, a true work of art

Thank you. Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Oh and Hawt!

VERY well written, well thought out. Very erotic as well as theologically sound.

It's a lovely story. It felt real. And it triggered some happy memories over my lovely Vienna which I once knew. Thank you for that.

But it also interest me if Janneke ever had another moment with you or someone else?

Love X

A very well written, artful and touching love story. Spellbound from the beginning to the end.Thank you so much for sharing!

Long but worthwhile, as well crafted. You develop the narrative line convincingly moving forward with fine details. There's a feeling of authenticity throughout. Well done to keep us involved throughout.

A beautiful love story. Thank you for sharing.

Written artistry destined for Literotica's Lesbian Hall of Fame.

Another 5*****Stars Loving Story!

Thank you for making our day Better!

A true Romance and Sensual Story mmmmmm

Thank you for some loving wet wet moments of true Pleasure mmmmm

Aunt Helena

54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal

Thank you for the story. I have nver read something that beautiful, sensual and touching. I loved every bit of it and wished Kate and Sabine stayed together.

Beautiful writing, there's so much truth in it.

That was great...makes me want to start writing again :)

Wirklich gelungen. Great story, great character development. Great sex scenes. Really, really, enjoyed this.

You caught lightening in a bottle with this one. The dialog was so true and natural. It was like watching a well-directed movie.

I loved every single word, I am old romantic at heart and this tale ticked every box, even the sex was romantic. Bravo.

Hello Katie Ann,

I read " Sabine ", and it's a beautifully written, hot sexy lesbian love story,,, well done!

Thank you for sharing,

Gay Kat.

Amazing story! One of the best erotic Short stories I have read. Great character development. Great sex scenes!

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OMG this is so beautiful! Thank you so much for writing something so amazing. I absolutely enjoyed it. I have such a strong connection with all types of stories and this one will definitely be at the top of my list. ♡♡♡♡ Again thank you!

This is my fourth time reading this story. And i love it more and more each time. So beautifully written.

A well written gem of a love story. A touch of truth about it. It is stories like this one that keeps me coming back, a true gem amongst the many rocks. Yes the sex scenes too we're well written that I'm sure many of us could relate to. Thank you KateAnnBB for a trip down memory lane.

This is an amazing story with great character development

Displays the budding love between two women beautifully

I would love to know what happened to Kate when she got home!

What a read!

Feels as if I experienced it all.

True talent.

I wish I could rate this more highly than five.

Beautifully told. Thank you.

To the Author:

This story perfectly conveys the magical feeling when lust and love blend perfectly. I hope this was real for you, as I hope it is for everyone at some time in their lives. This note is from a heterosexual male who thanks you for reminding him of the depth of feelings possible when the spiritual and animal flow together in an ideal state.

I am sorry that you lost your soul mate. Although like you said you'll always have the young and vibrant Sabine, which is more than some of us have. I do wish I could have translated the languages in order to been able to experience what Kate was feeling or understanding. Anyhow it was a very touching story. 5 🌟's

As a straight male, my appreciation of of Lesbian sex can only be through the minds and words of those who experience it. Kate's struggle to know her being, her slow acceptance of her feelings for Sabine and the final seduction by her more skilled, older companion is one of projection of the feelings of Kate as she willingly succumbs in a way I really felt. I could feel her love, and lust, for Sabine. And I was thrilled that she embraced not only her female lover, but her own sexuality.

I think you wrote an extremely beautiful story. And if it is true like you said, its all the more endearing.

Through this story I chanced upon Sabine- an enigma of a woman. You have beautifully brought her soul out.

And then the protagonist- you. I loved the fact that you stuck firmly to your Christian roots not matter what. And the moment when you accepted who you are was beautiful!

Overall, keep writing more stories like these. You know just how to bring depth into it.

Wonderful story and very believable. I cannot help but think that this is basically a true story.

You have written some of most in depth erotic descriptions I have ever read. Gay, bi, straight who the hell cares. It is raw human desire and discovery written extremely well. Thank you.

Brilliant, I can't find the words to express my admiration for the writing.

Yknow, that story is a wee bit too poetic for this site. It's like a shining golden ring in a field of rusted brown chains. A beautiful story and very steamy. Best of all is it seems very real, it has that nostalgic rosy view of past love mixed with a smoking hot depiction of a sexual awakening. All together very nice indeed

This is by far the most beautiful story I've ever read. I loved how you portrayed your characters, and as a young Christian woman myself who is still trying to come to grips with her sexuality, I found a little peace as I reflected at the turn of events that took place in Kate's life. I hope i will also find a love as beautiful as she had found. I was a bit sad that they eventually broke up though, but I hope they both found people to love again.

Just brilliant!!! Lack of words!

This is a truly beautiful story. I am straight but love is love and love so beautifully expressed does wonderful things for the soul. My soul is richer for reading this. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

While I'm not gay, I can understand the beginning where Kate feels like she can't be with the one she loves because it's "wrong". I can't be with the man I love for the "wrong" reasons and it kills me. I wish we could finally express that love in every way, but I have chosen to take the "right" path. While he's told me how he feels, I hope some day to tell him how I truly feel. I haven't because I was scared and knew that I shouldn't be so open because of his situation (obviously he's married). My faith, morals and integrity have kept me from being so open. We've never kissed, never had sex. I didn't want to fall in love with him and I wish I could fall out of love with him right this second. But, it would be my biggest regret in life if I never told him that I love him. I pray nearly every night that I will fall out of love with him. I had horrible health problems and didn't know if I would make it out alive and that definitely gives a person perspective. I would've never even thought about being this open with him before but thinking you could die makes you want to take those chances, especially for love. He told me he loved me and I feel horrible I didn't tell him I felt the same because of his situation. He's had feelings for me long before he was married, as have I. I hurt because I think I hurt him by not telling him how I feel. He exposed his heart and I didn't do the same. I don't want to break his marriage up. I just need to get this off my chest so I can finally move on and be with a man who truly loves me AND wants to be with me. I think people assume I'm gay because I haven't had a relationship with a man because I'm in love with him and have been for years. No one knows it's because I just can't see myself trying to move on with someone when I'm in love with someone else. I envy those out there who can love and live without any apologies and have that someone feel the same way back. Thank you Kate for showing that in your story. Who would've thought that a gay women's love story with another woman would effect a straight woman in love with a married man so much? Your story was very heartfelt and I could feel your angst. I've never told anyone my whole story. I guess I just felt like I could do it here, hopefully without judgement. Maybe I too found my soulmate but we aren't destined to be together. But, I'd assume as with Kate, I would never regret that love between us. Even if I would probably always want that love. Thank you Kate.

This is a beautiful story that so needed to be told. An exploration of someones profundity as they are drawn down the path of love to find how beautiful it can be.

Warmly a five

Your characters are so real, so human and lifelike. I just love love love the little details you include: "Sabine desperately tried to press down harder. Her mouth fell open and she got a faraway, desperate look in her eyes. Wide-eyed she looked down at me, imploring."

That was such a beautiful story. I fell in love with Sabine too, through the course of the story. Words can't describe how I felt for Kate, and feel for every young girl and boy like her, struggling to think that they are somehow wrong. Thank you for sharing this with the world. I hope those who need to read it most will also find it.

Legit one of the 2 or 3 best stories I've ever read on this, or any, erotic lit site. Bravo.

I am going through a storm of emotions now, breathing hard, tears flowing. What an astonishing beautiful story. Thank you so much!

just one word. WOW

That was a beautiful story told with extreme skill and finesse.

But why did they eventually part? Perhaps a follow on, perhaps not! A good author knows when to add the final full stop.

I can only echo the previous comments OH my what a great story, thank you!!!!!!!!

Intimate, intense, well penned, easy to read, kept me interested, fabulous.

Beautiful love story, thanks for writing it, sharing it.

This story is so beautiful and perfect. I loved every line and word. Thank you for writing and sharing this story!

Like most of her stories Sabine touches every nerve in motion sensation and it makes you think . 5🌟

That was amazing. I really like how you (the author) worked through all the objections of the character's conditioning to honor her body's needs. How you had discussions on prayer and religion within the context of an erotic lesbian love story. Your writing is smooth and tight, and the characters are so likeable. Reminded me what love can be like. Reminded me of my first lesbian love affair. Thank you for sharing.

I am so attached with this story. I hope i could find my sabine

I'm a sucker for a love story, and this delivered!

Absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.

What was once a random read has blossomed into one of my favorite tales. I have fallen in love with the story, the characters and, by extension, the author. Thank you for the beautiful journey, Katie. Any misspellings aside, and there were but few, this story is a perfect five.

This is oh my god this is beautifull i have fallen in love with this beautiful story. Thank you for giving us this hearth warming story.

Amazing women loving each other and giving to each other in a very passionate love affair. I am sorry it did not continue.

Extremely well written. Im sorry it had to end.

96

What a well done piece of work. Great feelings and emotions. Loved it - Thanks.

I just read this story for the second time (I read it quite some time ago and just rediscovered it) and I was touched even more than the first time. The descriptions of the emotions and their longing to be together were beautiful. Thank you!

Wow, what a powerful love story, thank you for sharing it with us!

I love this story.the emotions, the war which seems constant between Christianity and sexuality was laid to rest here. They made peace. I definitely reading this again. This is art.

I really enjoyed this story. Kate is absolutely delightful and Sabine sublime. "Reconcile"...Kate coming into her own by her own reason and pace--I found the process hilarious....Sabine patience and respect sexy...the two romantic and erotic! Great story, good job! I also appreciated that Kate could keep her moral compass and relationship with God through her reconciliations :)

Very spellbinding, erotic & captivating !!

Absolutely captivating from beginning to end. Thank you

My only complaint is that I would have rathered Sabine to end up as the wife, as a more gooey, and fluffy ending. Other than that (and honestly, the way you ended it was great as well, above was just how I felt about it.) This writting is wonderful, and I love how well you potrayed all of the characters. Very well done.

As a closeted individual who also lives in the South, comes from a strict religious family who views LGBTQ+ as abominations; along with other issues they have no understanding of, it was heartwarming that Kate was able to discover and find her true self, once she left that regressive, backwards town.

Also, to the anonymous user who commented that the ending should have had Sabine and Kate married; not all relationships last, as we were made to believe from those "happily ever after" stories we read as children. Life doesn't work that way.

Wonderful characters. It reads like finding love in real life. Thank you for writing this

I'm emotionally spent after reading this story. Thank you for sharing.

Wonderfully written... Loved the characters, the added details of the city and the languages. Strange to think about coming out in 1990... no internet to consult! And a very different climate of acceptance/tolerance (or lack thereof). Thanks for this little window into that time, place, and young lesbian in love. :)

Wonder characters and a bittersweet, but realistic outcome. Kate at least will always keep Sabine in her memory if not a piece of her heart! Wonderful.

Such a beautifully written story. So sensitive and perceptive.

This is the perfect lesbian romance. I adored it. Read and re-read it. Why can't I give it 10 stars? Even that would not be enough. As a story of awakening it is, to used that overused word properly, awesome; as a story of lovers coming together it is tender; and a piece of literature it is art. Thank you a thousand times.

As someone who's attracted to people a good 10-20 years older than myself (mid 20s) I've always enjoyed these kinds of stories, as it's exciting to see someone not only experiencing their first time in general; first time being with a woman in Kate's case, but the build up too: the courtship, struggles and frustrations that come along with it, and of course the sex; I love how the older guides the younger one by showing them the ropes, and then before you know it, the tables have turned and the student is now the teacher.

I've always wondered how old both Kate and Sabine were during this time; if I remember correctly, the year was in the 1990's, so maybe Kate was in her early 20's (possibly born sometime during the 1970's?) and if Sabine was 10 years her elder, then maybe she was in her 30's and born sometime during the 1960's (that's my best guess anyway). I wonder how old are they now, if they still talk from time to time, or if either is still alive.

Overthinking aside, I absolutely enjoyed this story, finding myself coming back to read it on more than one occasion; I hope I can enjoy a similar experience like this in my life one day, and as many people have said before, this is one of the best stories on Literotica or on the Internet period.

Awe damn when Kate and Sabine finally got it together it was so erotic and powerful and I became so jealous of there orgasms the way you described them WOW!!!!

Great job with this beautiful story.

It takes a lot of time for us to overcome our prejudice our families build into us. Some manage to do it easily and others take a lifetime.

I have been reading erotic stories for over 60 years. This is one of the very best, filled with expectation and discovery of true love of great depth.

it was wonderful, lovely, i love how u narate d story. a sweet romantic love that wil forever be there. i love it. thank you for sharing this.

The invention of the tongue and Churchill would have approved I will never forget. Great storiy really. Makes us believe in love. Wish. European references add to it

Superb! Beautiful. Powerful, personal and utterly convincing. Made me cry. What more can I say?