by Susan_in_a_thong
Keep it coming. I can't get enough of this story. Could you please mix a little anal into the story, would love for Sabrina to become an anal slut too.
Do all the readers a huge favor and skip the frequent and over use of "..." as it causes eye strain and isn't proper grammar. The proper method of indicating a pause is with a single coma (,).
I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WATING TO SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING! cAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEST CHAPTER!
....I have read in a long time. I became involved with my sister and my aunt and can appreciate every encounter between Sabrina, Jeff, Doug, and Denise. If you only knew how exciting it is to relive those times and moments. Just keep your method of writing and stay on the same theme of sensible fanticy, You have winner with this story.
Please, this can't be the end of this story. Please write more.
I do hope that this is not the final chapter. Would love to see how the relationship developes with Melissa. More please.