All Comments on 'Secrets In The Dark'

by blackzilla99

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
But everyone

will know whe her tummy starts getting big.

vargas111vargas111over 18 years ago
But everyone

will know whe her tummy starts getting big.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good story, my first woman was 35 and I was 13.

Wish you would write more, I don't care for the way a lot of writers here make women into sluts immediatly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

I RUBBED MYSELF UNTIL I CAME TWICETO THIS ....

STILL DRIPPING WISH I KNEW A WILSON

KillerWithWordsKillerWithWordsover 11 years ago
Great Job

You characterized Wilson perfectly with his desperation for Abigail and his tentativeness for showing so.

Congratulations for creating both a character and a plot almost every guy can relate to.

This was a pleasure to read.

Fantastic job.

cindylynn34cindylynn34almost 6 years ago

Very arousing story.. I have been in that situation twice.. The young man wasnt african american but it was exciting, to put it mildly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Compliments

Really good story told from a young man's perspective. Reminds me of my boyhood.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

OH MY GOD! You started writing about Westchester, golf, country clubs and older women and I was expecting to read about myself and my young, well hung black caddy. You nearly gave me a heart attack. Great job. - your first white woman & mother too.

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