by blackzilla99
Wish you would write more, I don't care for the way a lot of writers here make women into sluts immediatly.
I RUBBED MYSELF UNTIL I CAME TWICETO THIS ....
STILL DRIPPING WISH I KNEW A WILSON
You characterized Wilson perfectly with his desperation for Abigail and his tentativeness for showing so.
Congratulations for creating both a character and a plot almost every guy can relate to.
This was a pleasure to read.
Fantastic job.
Very arousing story.. I have been in that situation twice.. The young man wasnt african american but it was exciting, to put it mildly.
Really good story told from a young man's perspective. Reminds me of my boyhood.
OH MY GOD! You started writing about Westchester, golf, country clubs and older women and I was expecting to read about myself and my young, well hung black caddy. You nearly gave me a heart attack. Great job. - your first white woman & mother too.