All Comments on 'Shanu's Wedding Pt. 03'

by harrie1963

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
EXCELLENT.

It is a great story. Please do write Book two.I want to see Kathleen pregnant and living with her sons for some length of time. Your imagination is HOT. PLEASE CONTINUE....

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Barf

Barf. You seem to have lost the plot entirely by bringling steaming logs of poo and licking it clean.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
too much liking and pee

please avoid overdose of pee and licking shit etc. go on and include ciliberity family orgies etc like amitabh,dhermendra family etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I am addicted to your stories

How do you manage to imagine such a marvellous plot and equally memorable characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

Your narration is amazing. Hope we read more from you. May I suggest if you could write in hindi to make it more erotic for more readers. Great!!!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous