All Comments on 'Shy Kora Ch. 01'

love this first story it has so much promise of one very hot horny story.

shy kora chapter one. i for one would love chapter two three and four or more. love the story and the very exciting writing.

More, more, more!

I hope you keep it up. There are so many ways you can take this story!

Brookell

The writing might be fine, but this is nowhere near long enough to engage people. If this was a chapter in a novel, it would be finishing around the middle of page two.

I suggest you take your next few submissions and combine them into something substantially longer.