by OldKingClancy
A Hearts fan, ate. Well, you must be pretty happy that your team is in the Scottish Cup Final. Looks like a good chance to win since you don't have to face Celtic. Go Man U.
Nice and gritty. Makes a pleasant change from some of the childish , fairy tale fantasies that appear here far too often.Thank you.
The darkness of this story makes it all the more real, it s not some perfect romance like a lot of these play out to be, just when things start to tie up, something shitty happens and throws the plot back to being a wild-card, i love it!!
Very dark and at times disturbing, but that is what makes this story interesting. We'll see what happens next.
I am absolutely loving this story not some fairy tale like some of the stories here a bit of grit and darkness I hope that they end up together though
I'll stick with you for at least a while. The technical side of your submission was much improved over the first effort. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading for at least another chapter.
You have gone and done it again and I really liked the story and looking forward to the next chapter.!* Been awhile but I will have a few of your other stories to read also. You just keep on writing.!**
I liked your stories so please continue I would really like to see how this plays out
Hope you continue this story. It's much more about what people are really like and how they react than many that appear in Literotica. Of Course, we all hope for a satisfying ending (no pun intended...well maybe) even though we are not always given one.
Bye the way, not to worry about the differences between English (or English with a Scottish accent) and American. Some of us even need to put on the closed captions when watching a BBC program set in Scotland (I.e. Taggert).
Hey, I just finished the second part of your story but was a little disappointed that there was not a third part. Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed it and I think it has been well thought out and edited. Keep up the good work--please do a 3rd part
Great writing, but my opinion of every character just fell through the floor. I hope things get better though. :|
there is no way in hell he would ever g back for any reason, the family disowned him so he would never go back. another story ruined by a writer that fails to keep the story believable and fails to think before writing.
Worthless fucks. Sorry but your main characters in this story are worthless as shit. I stopped reading any sex scenes and will skip all others because they don't mean shit and will just read just enough to get the idea of the story and finish since I'm this far in. Can't believe these two people created Nicola.
Damn, what a bunch of worthless bitches for commenters, lol. Damn good story! Too bad people get hooked on drugs. I've seen it ruin people, best friends and an old girl friend got so strung out she stuck a sawed off shotgun in her mouth and pulled the trigger. What a waste of precious life. 5 big ass fucking huge flaming nova stars for the story! Not so sure I want to read any more though.