All Comments on 'Steven’s Mum Is a Slut'

Love to parade for you and your mum wearing fishnets and high heels wanking

The sissification should have been tagged as well

Proof Reading is required. While doing so, please watch for verb tense inconsistencies.

Tremendous potentials lay ahead for this, and other story lines. You have them waiting, as are we readers.

Part 2?

A foreseeable plot, same sheeme of threesome swinging couple with narrator boy. Depraved porn incest that made it but leaves a shallow gap of warm blooded personality of the characters. So just ****

Sorry, it was war too rushed to me. It's Ike a plot description of similar slut stories. There's no build up of the figures thoughts and feelings, no situations a reader could dulge in. Steep peak and sudden end.