All Comments on 'Sunshine's Realization'

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Well written but where is the story?

Your wife is a whore, I know that would really turn me on.

In spite of or because of the jumping around of the the story line, I found it a great read.

has basically lied to you all along. Goodness what will you do? Get all hard and beg her to tell you who else she has fucked since then? Or how much money she made as a whore in porn movies? Or maybe tell you when her last medical checkup occurred and whether after a year she is still HIV, among other things, negative? You can stay married to her but know in your heart you can never trust her again nor can she say she really loves you and you believe it!

what you didn't know, she was a whore also. If she makes good money in the porn movies, maybe you can get that boat you always wanted and couldn't afford. She can keep making movies and you can keep a few beach bunnies on the side. That sounds like an even trade.

Other than providing you the opportunity to describe various sex acts, what was the purpose of this screed?

Run away

Well written and really sexy. In the last scene you forgot to mention that Sunshine is his wife more often to the reader. Which would have made it sexier.

If all your stories are about this nasty whore, and this badly written, why would anyone read them.