by DrSqueaky
I enjoy the overall story very much, so I gave this one chapter a higher rating than I normally would. There just wasn't the "emotional connection" that most of the other chapters have. The "sex club game" just didn't do anything for me personally. I know it is hard to come up with a way for the main character to experience a wider variety of sexual experiences, but this particular chapter didn't work for me. I'm glad to see a new chapter though, and will continue to wait for the next chapter.
I mostly agree with the previous comment.
However, the sex party did contribute more toward Biill's mission by possibly impregnating several women.
Paul in Oklahoma