All Comments on 'SX69 - Ultimate Love Potion Ch. 03'

you keep using the same language over and over. Yes, we know 12 hours is the longest he has went without sex since meeting Sara and so on! Also how could he smell the other women on the plane to England when he was on a private jet? Gave this part a 3. Hopefully repetiton is held to a minimum...though I think it will get worse....here's hoping not.

Not going to finish the first page when you forgot a 2-letter word early on!

Hhhhmmmm....how to go about this, in the face of the other comments...???

Again, this is some humorous, which makes it fun to read; yet, it is monotonous at points!! I also have hopes that the remaining 20+ chapters will change up and expand...would be a shame to have to abandon the series in the middle!!

Editing and wring errors already dealt with...

The short bit about the cat-lady widow was rather abrupt; I was glad that they had time together and enjoyed their marriage...I am sure, as she said, she was quite happy with the arrangement, and left her fortune to him!

World traveler now...this will be interesting if nothing else (I hope!!)