by Kai Kenobi
Killing him off was a little much but otherwise really a hot story.
You should definently keep going with this, it's really good!
WOW!! This is so hot. Please give us chapter 3. It's so naughty and so hot. XOXO Joanniehrny4u.
The story felt really disjointed. The violence just seemed out of place. Not sexy at all.
You know it WE WANT LOTS MORE CHAPTERS you are such a tease I LOVE IT !!!! Keep'em cumming and we will too... Love your gift !!!! I wonder will mommy catch them and turn Candi into the slut she truly desires to be after all there are lots of bills going to have to be paid... Maybe some humiliation is in store movies to be made turn the bitch out make daddy watch her be used blacks, and black market video's, trips to the farm bestiality the themes are endless and innocents to be torn asunder have fun with it... Thanks for sharing shawnholman54@yahoo.com if you ever need a proof reader or a sick mind to get more ideas LOL
please this is so good this is like one of those drama shows on the tv ^.^ i love it
Better keep writing more chapters. You leave it at chapter 2 there may be a riot. Don't add any more rape-that's just gross.
This Chp was really something, has more plot development then any story ive read hear, not sure if i want a chp 3 but it'd be interesting
Totally Confusing. From Dream State to Reality with no way to tell when he switched.
The first chapter of this was good. But this. A complete 180 and not a good one.
Wow... this went way bad. Went from vanilla to phyco crazy..
Some might get off on beating up thier children to rape them basically. Betray thier loving marriage. For lust.