All Comments on 'That Old House'

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AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexover 13 years ago
Nice story

Is there going to be a part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Really?

Honestly, I could only hang in for 3 pages. The crudity of these people in truly amazing, particularly the daughter, which is just stunning. It appears this story regards British people, making it even harder to take. Also, that these men mention suddenly have an epiphany about how sexy these women they have worked side by side with for years are? It's interesting that each and every woman the describe has generous breasts and a great ass. Maybe I'm just a naive American.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story wrong category

This is a well-written story, with an interesting plot and characters, but incest and urination don't really belong in the Romance genre. This chapter should either be reclassified as Erotic Couplings, or the above elements should be revised.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a2 months ago

Author has a good writtng style. I like the fact that Gerry has such a nature, open mind. She accepts Gary's actions with his daughter without negative judgment even though she has not had sexual relations with her son yet.

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