All Comments on 'The Book of David Ch. 11'

While I enjoyed this chapter, I have to confess that I am anxious for Lit to post the final 3 chapters so I can see if David ends up with Amber in the end.

Yes, of all the women that he has met, Amber is still by far and away my fave, and I hope they get together in the remaining two years of this story.

Fantastic story, and I have to say, THANK YOU for writing it all ahead of time and not driving us crazy by posting it over a few months time, as you write it.

I think Amber touched every reader's heart here, although i personally think that if David ended up with Cherys (anything's possible right??) that would bring the whole story to a full circle. Thank you.

...if you're lucky...that golden moment...that moment that eclipses all other moments in a man's life...happens to you...if you're lucky...Like winning the mega-million lottery...Very rare...and NOT to be missed...

Hope he didn't get her pregnant :)

I would love you to follow Briana for another offshoot story like you did with E-Beth. She is hot a all heck. I love the naughtiness in private. Keep up the good work.

Ive loved this long story... Glued to it! It's been my nite time go-to before bed, terrific stuff! ....but, two hours and he luuuurrrvs her? Rofl! ...notice how he never asked her how old she was either? Hehe (lol, like I would have on a dark moonlit beach the night before I fly out...;). But a lovely plot escape after his fuckup of letting the girlfriend go unhinged and he just played along to get his jollies off!

You sure know how to keep the train at full speed!

I'm not sure how many mountains you can scale without burning both David and I out, but it's been one helluva ride, that's for certain!

Jason

Simply superb! Your description of their lovemaking on the beach is an erotic masterpiece. Well done!