All Comments on 'The Closet'

... just like the tryst in the closet. Well done!

Has been mentioned on the New Story Review in the Author's Hangout Forum.

Two for two! Well done. Time to go upstairs and attack the wife...

I read your hayride story and went looking for more...

You did NOT disappoint! Your name is fitting...you truly are an erotic master of the word, painting vivid pics and evoking emotion!

...and the promise of after-play! Sexy little vignette! :)

WOW ! An over used word, but none more apt to describe the feelings generated by your sensuous writing. The sexy tit for tat across the room with the beer bottles was fun. When 2-people of a like mind flirt like that it can be overwhelming. They couldn’t help themselves. The experience is probably a once in a lifetime erotic event. Would love for this to have happened to my wife, then have her relate her experience to me later in bed. We’d relive that encounter many many times as we both enjoyed her lusty luck. What a turn on. OMG, you write sexy stories !! Another easy 5-🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆 ❤️