All Comments on 'The Deepest Taboo Ch. 02'

by gymmyt

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LutherTLutherTover 18 years ago
Great Story!

Excellent erotica. Loved the ending. Keep up the great writing.

TongueDocAtWorkTongueDocAtWorkover 18 years ago
Oh yeah, my cock is still hard...

Loved the story...only wish it had been longer...made me hard as a rock!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Out of Sight

I hope this isn't the end. Good story, keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
continue the story - the daughters need to fuck!

hope you bring some more lesbian action into this...mom sounds fun too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hot story

more details in daughter having a really difficult time handling a 10 inch cock...that's really big. It would be more hot if some attempted anal talk was involve. Great job

imurddyimurddyover 13 years ago
well

Not a bad story, I agree with some of the people from part one, small tits are better than fake boobs. When I see fake boobs on a porno, I fast forward it, can't stand them. Natural tits look good, big or small, fake ones look nasty!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Smoking. Hot. ;). MmmmmMmmm... Hot, young asian wife and two hot half asian daughters, daaaaamn!! What more could you ask for?! Woo!

Awesome freakin' story!!

My only other comment would be for you to use contractions when they're talking. 'I am cumming!' 'I'm cumming!' Unless it's someone from another country that took classes to learn english, pretty much everyone uses contractions when talking, it just sounds unnatural otherwise.

Thanks for wrighting the great story! I'm off to read more of your stuff:)

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