All Comments on 'The Doll'

this is excellent. would love to see more of this story

Loved this. Please please please continue it

I hated it-not because it isn't a good story, it is. It's well written and plotted, I just hate the idea of an evil bitch like Sonia winning.

5 Stars! Loved it. Would love a sequel!

Horrible.

Well written, but disgusting story. Left me horrified. Rape, humiliation, body shaming .

Best work in this website, pls do another chapter, pls

Holy shit - a new Cactusjuggler story! Welcome back. Have been aching for more for years! Doesn't disappoint either. Nasty, cruel and just about the hottest scenario! The 'I am your God' moment will be etched in my mind for a long time.

Wow great comeback. So nice to see some new stories from you. And what a superb story. Great ideas and details, i so liked the smelling and tasting aspects.

P.S. Any reason why you did not (re-) publish all your stories here (I think i read all stories i could find so far - so thanks for publishing all of them)

That's a hot, hot story. Melissa's slow slide into slavery, knowing what her fate is going to be but unable to change it.

Wonderful to see you back writing CJ. Also nice to see you haven’t changed one bit. It’s fun to see how much your writing has improved over the past twenty years, I can barely believe it’s been so long. Same old from you, where evil gets its way. I loved it.

Write next about the enslaving of the mom

I would love a series about Sonia using her powers to expand her harem.

I don't know how people can enjoy mind control that not even the sub gets to enjoy. Domination is very hot but being forced to do something that you cannot enjoy while being trapped and conscious is actually nightmarish.

"I don't know how people can enjoy mind control that not even the sub gets to enjoy."

I'm on the same page and I find it unacceptable in real life when it's done to someone else.

But in stories, I guess the reader may prefer to empathize with that victim this way. Not for this exact story but, I think many submissive people would wish they were enslaved by a beautiful woman against, feeling as the victim does in the story, instead of their willing mindset.

It sounds reasonable to find it more alluring, since not much resistance is left in that reader.

Such a shame. I was really rooting for Melissa in the end.

Maybe the moral of the story will make readers be more considerate of their treatment of people.

Hopefully there is a second chapter where Sonia gets her comeuppance.

Absolutely fantastic. Love it. Would love to see a sequel; maybe one where Sonia claims Melissa’s mom, or dresses up Melissa in wildly embarrassing ways, or tries out a collection of toys on her new doll. So many possibilities.