All Comments on 'The Game Pt. 01'

Great story...impatiently waiting for part 2...very hot

very nice led zeppelin reference,but your story is rubbish,incidentally,

i've read a similar story here in literotica in the past.

Can you open a story with a less appealing line: "I'm Tommy?" that's pretty juvenile.

So's the ending To be continued, is third grade.

You really screwed up the story.

It’s a good thing his name wasn’t Ishmael.

When will part 2 be released?

This is an unrepentant stroke story, and fulfills it’s purpose very well. If you’re looking for high quality literature, forget it, that’s not what this is designed for. And it does open the gate for a whole series, for which, many thanks. I also note that no other commentators have had the guts to identify themselves. Pity.