by The Style Guy
I've become a "Style Guy" fan. Your female characters are the kind of sluts, that I wish I could be. I hope you continue with more stories. Lee
In baseball sometimes you see the pitcher throw the perfect homerun pitch, the bat cracks and you know it is gone and then it just drifts to a fly ball.
You had a great story, but was over done in the macho and slut crapola. Would have been alot more interesting to have the guy a guy and not supercock and the wife a vulnerable woman made more complete by a young stud who brought her self esteem back , and, an ending where the professor got a fitting payback.
You don't have to follow the other posters stereoBS. Original stories like yours are a great surprise, just don't repeat what lesser posters churn out.
Below average writing skills. Well deserved 1* !
Suddenly the quirks stop coming and things get heated but clichéd . The madcap quality was lost. I don't want to diss the author, but this was an experiment that he seemed to tire of conducting . This had elements of ' The Paper Chase ' and ' The Last Picture Show' which are two of my fav reads and movies, but The Stye Guy seemed to stop striving to stay in transcendent mode.
"He's blackmailing me. He's using me as a slave." An 8" cock with a plum sized head that cums nearly a foot up her pussy? Really? The guys in some of your stories seem to have an over sized ego to go with the plum sized head. Signed: BTW
He won't graduate without passing this course, so the professor has him by his balls. Now he is having unprotected sex with the professor's wife. What happens if she gets pregnant? The professor will be embarrassed, but he could end up with 18+ years of child support. This story is too much fantasy.
Nothing, it could have been better if professor was using him to get proof of his wife infidelity but in that case she needs to be older. This story is nothing but masturbation drivel.
This story shows the level of intelligence of the writer. Which college professor would blackmail a student for a yardwork? For a good chance of losing his college position? Yardwork is so visible to everybody, for a gain of what ... $100? To have non-professional to paint his house? What a moronic idea. By the way, statisticians are mathematicians, what mathematician is married to a unemployed bimbo? This is so stupid it is ridiculous.
Dropped it in the middle of the story... So, like the story... you have more work to do. Or Fail.