All Comments on 'The Harem Ch. 08'

before you write anything else. nice build up, 8 chapters, and the sex sucked so much.

If you have nothing nice to say, then shut up.

I thought your stories were well writen, and I would love to read more stories.

A wonderful story. Great characterisation, and development.

The plot was a little meager but more than enough to satisfy most of us. The description of those other worlds was excellant. There is more to love than climax, & ejaculation. Things like romance, pair bonding, companionship, caressing is equally important as copulation. There are plenty of bodice ripping tales, on this site to satisfy they who wish for it, alone. Keep writing, you have the talent to become a published author with a wide following. Thanks, Dan.