All Comments on 'The Kick Inside: A Forbidden Love'
by LadySugar
- 11 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoReminds me of the love I shared with my brother many years ago. One day our parents walked in on us and my father kicked him out of the house and suggested that he would call the police if he ever returned.
I never heard from him again.
Anonymousover 13 years agoa lovely story....needs a chapter 2 continue on. I'll be waiting for the next chapter
Anonymousover 13 years agowhat a lovely story!! i enjoyed the slow fire smoldering away inside Laurel and China...the sex scenes were true love making at it's finest...
makes me wish i had a sister to love me in such a way!
this is a 5 star story...and more! someone suggested a chapter 2---may i second that "emotion??" i would love to see true love win the day...but the course of true love is never smooth, as we all know.
well, done LS...please keep submitting your stories...we, your lucky readers, are eternally grateful...xxx
love,
david xxxxx
digdaddyrichover 13 years agoI don't know what I liked the best, the sex or the love that they have for each other.
A really sweet love affair that I hope that the author will continue.
Thanks for the read.
P.Lighthouseover 13 years agoThat is the story I'd love to live.
Chapter 2, please.
They must to be together for ever and their parents must to accept it.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoseems we have another wanna be writer that can only write half a story. either finish this story or delete it it isn't fair to the readers to leave it like this. as is this is like reading a book with the second half ripped out. only deserves a 2/5 if you ever finish and do it soon and properly then you will get a better rating but not as it is.
DBRS
Anonymousover 12 years agoMost sibling romance stories are much longer beacause the love can only be shown with dramas that require details. This story is way to small and it doesn't have a conclusion. Write some more chapters for this one and don't rush. Let the love be tested on various challenging conditions. I'm eager to rate it 5 stars if you write more
Anonymousover 11 years agoIt's a shame how some writers start a story and then don't finish it. I wish they just don't post a story if they aren't going to finish it or continue.
