All Comments on 'The One That Got Away Ch. 02'

Five.

Thanks for writing a part 2. This was amazing! :)

That was such a stupid story. No way would a real person take someone back like that. He has conversation & laughs with her before asking why she left him. They both acted like it was no big deal, like it was so inconsequential.

The story cries out for A part 3, time to explore her feelings of Worth or the lack of.

The story seemed shallow to me. Not much of a plot. No in depth character development to help understand their actions. In the end my key reactions were disappointment and boredom.

Not recommended!

THC