All Comments on 'The Race'

The only flaw is the concept isn't fully developed; we need more succubi intrusions into more cities, and more sexy metamorphosis.

Great story! I hope you will write more chapters.

Plese write more chapters - I for one really want to see if this invasion succeeds or not.

That was, without a doubt, the sexiest, most well written story I have seen in a long time. Please keep up the good work and write more like this. You have just earned a fan.♥

Very well thought out. I've never found myself so reading a literotica story for The plot as well as the sex scenes.

Though the sex scenes are a bit lacking, for understandable reasons.

Maybe they could be improved if the aliens became bored and decided to feed/convert for fun more than for hunger.

Or maybe the symbiotic relationship could work both ways, where the human body's libido causes the succubi to crave sex.

That would allow for more drawn out, kinky sex. Maybe even keeping a few humans captive and unconverted purely as pleasure sluts/slaves?

It could also be hot to have a small group like a family capured without being converted, and then forced to fuck each other for the succubi's sadistic pleasure.

I wonder how the succubus plan on feeding as they make more and more women hosts and continue to feed on the men killing them. You are going to reach a tip-over point where the food supply can not support the succubuses who remain. From the story it seems like they are converting all females into succubuses wheither just a straight forward succubus or a specialize succubus like Heather. If the human race does not begin to control it's population growth year afer year some where in the futher we will reach thar tip-over point where food resoures can not feed the world population Some countries like the US, Canada and a few others probably survire because of the amount of food we grow and export.+ Retired Army NCO

There's tiny problem. What would happen after all makes die then. I mean they would starve to death, so shouldn't there be some kind of mechanism to birth males as well?